LADY IN RED
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04/16/10
DyignWithoutTheScars
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Please continue your story!
It is awesome..

02/28/07
VH-reviewer
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Two very important pieces of advice: 1) Please punctuate, 2) Please find a beta reader. It is more likely that people will read your story if it can be read. When all of the sentences run together and the words are misspelled, it's harder to read.